No I would not like to be an on tour rockstar because you have to play in so many concerts and avoid the paparazziand fans. So besides the money it would be a drag.
What else can you add? How can you make this connect to the story and Kaira's experiences of being a music star? For example, did Kaira have any of these troubles? Over all, it has very good thinking, you just might want to expand of the thinking.
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you might want to leave out the drugs thing and elaborate on this a tiny bit more
Please take out the bad stuff and please keep this post appropriate for school.
What else can you add? How can you make this connect to the story and Kaira's experiences of being a music star? For example, did Kaira have any of these troubles? Over all, it has very good thinking, you just might want to expand of the thinking.
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